Wrecked (510 hits)
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Submitted by lechuza (View user info) at 2006-10-29 20:39:58 EST
Have you ever had a guy holding a gun at your face? Last night I got five of them holding
five guns at my face. The feeling of it is something you never get used to, is not fear,
because you are aware of what will happen if someone pulls one trigger, wait... yeah, I almost
pissed myself because I knew what would had happened, but it was also rage.
I knew I could have taken them in a one on one easily, but, how can you fight back in my
situation? I covered my face with my arms as they started to kick me on the hot pavement
underneath my feet's. In the matter of seconds, I was laying on my knees as one of them
grabbed me by my hair and smacked my face with his fist repeatedly. I feel not pain; I
felt nothing but the sting of my eyebrow piercing stretching my flesh as the fist made
a violent contact with me eye.
I was alone, there were 3 cars in line, waiting in the road but they did nothing, they
just watched as I was turned into a bloody mass being kicked in the ground. Only fifteen
minutes and it was over, they got in their car and started a magnificent runaway. The
cars waiting in line continued their way as if they had seen nothing as I faded.
I woke up this morning, the swelling in my face was so extent I was a shapeless mass of
black and blue skin. I searched for bullet holes, but I found none. My SUV was wrecked.
By looking at it I could remember the crash. The stunning sound of steel of their car
hitting mine, the one they used to take me out of the road. The way they crashed my
window to make me get out of the car, I remembered everything, except their faces. I
was too busy looking at their guns, trying to guess the caliber, maybe calculating a
way to get out. I was so foolish, my calculations were worthless.
I most get on my feet and take my backpack out of the remains of my SUV, They won't break me
down, I most keep on moving before they come back.
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Submitted by LittleMonster (user info) at 2007-03-29 18:10:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I like the way you write.
Submitted by DonovanMD (user info) at 2007-01-24 23:49:25 EST (#)
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Well since all you have is two posts, I'll just do them for now.
Submitted by dexpaxas (user info) at 2006-12-29 16:20:47 EST (#)
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Submitted by hot_pocket (user info) at 2006-12-29 16:09:00 EST (#)
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continue...
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2006-12-18 12:53:55 EST (#)
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Submitted by ih8u2man (user info) at 2006-12-16 18:39:33 EST (#)
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I liked this. Please post more.
Submitted by TigerLilly (user info) at 2006-11-30 06:32:28 EST (#)
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How come you don't post much???
Submitted by Pentameter (user info) at 2006-10-31 09:17:27 EST (#)
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Submitted by lechuza (user info) at 2006-10-29 22:45:52 EST (#)
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I never said five guns each. My bad I guess
Submitted by ilikesteak (user info) at 2006-10-29 22:38:23 EST (#)
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So let me get this correct. Five people holding five guns to your face. So that makes 25 guns and five people with three extra arms. You are a lying slore.
Submitted by Bubba2341 (user info) at 2006-10-29 21:50:01 EST (#)
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Submitted by Axolotl (user info) at 2006-10-29 21:22:24 EST (#)
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Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2006-10-29 21:13:12 EST (#)
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Submitted by JMG114 (user info) at 2006-10-29 20:43:16 EST (#)
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No comment.
Submitted by lechuza (user info) at 2006-10-29 20:42:29 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
this is 98% real because my SUV is parked outside and it's fine