Asking Forgivness (753 hits)
Category: NoneRating: -0.88 on 26 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Allyson (View user info) at 2006-11-12 23:15:46 EST
Asking Forgiveness
Shading my heart
From the one who must know
Lost inside my life once more.
Wiping away the tears from my face
Rising up,
I'm lost again
There's nothing left
Inside this broken soul again
Crying aloud
For times once known so well
And nothing can bring back the love
Nothing can hide that which you do
Looking inside your heart once again
Falling again
And wishing to be seen, just by one.
I love you,
But I can never tell.
You are taken,
I mustn't break another's heart
So lost
When will it feel better?
When will I love again?
Am I condemned to this?
Am I supposed to like this?
I'm sorry.
Take this, as a token
Of my broken heart.
Leave me
Again.
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Wooo, poetry. Leave the -2, and be on your way.
User Reviews
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2006-11-14 19:47:06 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
You need to see a shrink. And let him fuck your tits until he spooges on your gob.
That'll be $100.
Submitted by Unabonger (user info) at 2006-11-14 19:20:53 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
you're an ugly lesbian and have a tit shot on uber proving you're simply insecure.
you fucking loser.
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2006-11-13 17:46:09 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
asking forgiveness for that hideous picture?
Submitted by i_can_get_you_a_toe (user info) at 2006-11-13 17:20:24 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by Doodles (user info) at 2006-11-13 09:17:04 (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by goferforhire (user info) at 2006-11-13 02:36:41 (#)
Ranking: -2
I don't -2 poetry.
I -2 bad poetry, which this is.
I also -2 the superfriends.
I also -2 your unnecessary attempts to gain popularity by waving your funbags around.
I also -2 your naive belief that those funbags were either fun or attractive.
I also -2 sandbag tits and a face that looks like my friend Daniel
You're down on a lot of counts.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-11-13 17:07:58 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
That review just made me order my offical Crystle Fan Club Decoder Ring.
Submitted by Danger_Ranger (user info) at 2006-11-13 16:58:48 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Crystle (user info) at 2006-11-13 15:52:08 (#)
Ranking: -2
http://www.ubersite.com/m/95563#2221176
because I'm jealous of your good looks,popularity, sooper frenz, and fabulous writing ability
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And *this*, my friends, this single, nondescript review, almost lost in an ocean of pithy comments, witty retorts and -2dies, signals the wheels falling off this strange and peculiar site. This is the lone butterfly fluttering it's wings, and the repercussions will echo through the marble halls of empty ether and reverberate through windswept bandwidth in an age yet dawned - Crystle got catty.
Jesus Crystle do ya think she was serious??
Submitted by Crystle (user info) at 2006-11-13 15:52:08 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
http://www.ubersite.com/m/95563#2221176
because I'm jealous of your good looks,popularity, sooper frenz, and fabulous writing ability
Submitted by Method (user info) at 2006-11-13 10:38:04 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by indoninja (user info) at 2006-11-13 10:23:50 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Wooo, poetry. Leave the -2, and be on your way.
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done and done.
Submitted by tartpumper (user info) at 2006-11-13 10:23:41 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Fucking poetry. Poetry is shit and for homos.
Or shockingly ugly lesbians with big tits
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-11-13 10:18:20 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
-4 Decent topic, unimpressive execution.
+2 no ruddy faced titwhore.
Submitted by firefly (user info) at 2006-11-13 09:35:49 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
no
Submitted by Doodles (user info) at 2006-11-13 09:17:04 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by goferforhire (user info) at 2006-11-13 02:36:41 (#)
Ranking: -2
I don't -2 poetry.
I -2 bad poetry, which this is.
I also -2 the superfriends.
I also -2 your unnecessary attempts to gain popularity by waving your funbags around.
I also -2 your naive belief that those funbags were either fun or attractive.
I also -2 sandbag tits and a face that looks like my friend Daniel
You're down on a lot of counts.
Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2006-11-13 03:52:52 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by iddqd (user info) at 2006-11-13 03:12:55 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
I LOVED YOU IN SHAUN OF THE DEAD
Submitted by goferforhire (user info) at 2006-11-13 02:36:41 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
I don't -2 poetry.
I -2 bad poetry, which this is.
I also -2 the superfriends.
I also -2 your unnecessary attempts to gain popularity by waving your funbags around.
I also -2 your naive belief that those funbags were either fun or attractive.
I also -2 sandbag tits and a face that looks like my friend Daniel
You're down on a lot of counts.
Submitted by Allyson (user info) at 2006-11-13 02:26:56 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
no... no more boobies.
I will get drunk again...
but i will have disabled my net if i do even TRY to go online. HA! seeing a drunk person try to fix the internet! AHA! i can't do it without tech support, while SOBER!
Submitted by frankthebear (user info) at 2006-11-13 02:24:57 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
does this mean no more boobies?
Submitted by shinebox (user info) at 2006-11-13 02:03:47 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
SHINE
FUCKING
BOXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Submitted by Istaros (user info) at 2006-11-13 01:25:55 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
there's no way we, as sensitive members of the human race, are going to accept any kind of apology for those lego tits with an oompa loompa face behind. ever.
Submitted by Danger_Ranger (user info) at 2006-11-13 00:34:41 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
*peers through crack between fingers of hand covering eyes...*
phew - that was close. +1 poem.
Submitted by frankthebear (user info) at 2006-11-13 00:19:44 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 because I don't get poetry!
SUPERFRIENDS!
Submitted by Allyson (user info) at 2006-11-12 23:35:22 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
oh, i'm not trying to please anyone here...
just wanted to get "titts" of the main page...
:)
Submitted by Lisa (user info) at 2006-11-12 23:30:36 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
I didn't really like it, but it seemed genuine and I can identify with feeling hopeless and lovelorn. You shouldn't be so self-deprecating, you don't have to please anyone here.
Submitted by Axolotl (user info) at 2006-11-12 23:22:01 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
You are forgiven my holy daughter, though thy breasts are ill-defined and thy areolas blend in with your skin.
Child of Oathmeal, I absolve you in the name of the Goatse, the Tubgirl, and the Lemonparty. Go in peace to love and serve Bart.
Submitted by locksly (user info) at 2006-11-12 23:21:33 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
thought this was gonna be about your tits again