Pursuit (506 hits)
Category: GeneralRating: 1.64 on 20 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Orgasmatron (View user info) at 2006-11-14 16:26:54 EST
Come out to midnight thin with starlight strewn,
With silent stone below -
To run with me beneath the winter moon
Before the distant calling of the lark,
Before the sun awakens let us go
Barefoot bounding, naked in the dark:
Come, run with me beneath the winter moon.
That I may decide,
That I may race the wind and best a bride,
That I may chase footprints deep and white
Across these sleeping fields, empty traces
Each possessing countless lives and places --
And I need your love,
Need your hair cascading in the night
The racing heartbeats calling each to each
Yet yours beyond my simple fingers' reach.
A handled hip, together falling down,
Crystalline and coupled in stillwater waves,
Tracing every length, the latitude lines
To map your world and make it wholly mine --
My skies, my seas, my blessed unbroken ground;
This midnight meeting miracles may bring:
Our names this earth our union will engrave
As we make upon this snow a second sort of spring.
User Reviews
Submitted by JohnnyACDC (user info) at 2008-08-12 07:22:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
coolio
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2006-11-15 08:17:46 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Deep.
Submitted by JoeyG (user info) at 2006-11-15 03:29:51 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Only just managed to read it, as my eyes were still watering from your prolapse piece, but excellent job none-the-less.
Cool pic, too!
Submitted by Stagger_Lee (user info) at 2006-11-14 23:14:09 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
This is pretty good.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-11-14 23:05:13 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Everything good today starts with "P." "My pursuit of Peon on the Poet's Pursuit poem post placed post-pumpkininny creme brulee plus pumpkin ale. Perfect.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-11-14 22:53:25 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Another Peon sighting.
Careful...this may become a trend.
Submitted by Professional_Peon (user info) at 2006-11-14 22:50:46 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
*sigh*
That theres perdy wurds
:-)
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-11-14 22:30:27 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Man, I sure hope that the next time I want to change jobs I find a company willing to put up $51.5 million just to negotiate with me.
Jeebus Crips...
Submitted by Crystle (user info) at 2006-11-14 18:57:06 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No it doesn't. It has crystalline.. which is also a very pretty word, and not why I'm biased.
It's pretty. all together.
So THERE!
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Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-11-14 17:58:24 (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Crystle (user info) at 2006-11-14 17:50:09 (#)
Ranking: 2
I like your pretty poetry.
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You're just biased because it has the word 'crystal' in it.
Submitted by Amontillado (user info) at 2006-11-14 18:44:18 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2006-11-14 18:39:24 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2006-11-14 18:34:29 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
CAN HARDLY WAIT FOR PURSUIT 2 - ELECTRIC BOOGALOO
Submitted by keden7 (user info) at 2006-11-14 18:08:42 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Fantastic.
Submitted by sicosemen (user info) at 2006-11-14 18:05:29 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Obligatory +2 in the hopes that one day we can make man fuck...or I can be in "what's in a name." If I had my druthers, I'd ask for the man fuck.
Submitted by KindaNews (user info) at 2006-11-14 18:03:05 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
I liked this.
There were too many 'with's in the first stanza.
Your conscious use of repetition later was effective, however.
Generally, a good effort.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2006-11-14 17:58:24 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Crystle (user info) at 2006-11-14 17:50:09 (#)
Ranking: 2
I like your pretty poetry.
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You're just biased because it has the word 'crystal' in it.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-11-14 16:31:52 (#)
Ranking: 2
This story sounds familiar to me.
It's beautiful.
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I loves to butcher me some greek mythology.
Submitted by Crystle (user info) at 2006-11-14 17:50:09 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I like your pretty poetry.
Submitted by ih8u2man (user info) at 2006-11-14 17:27:04 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
This deserves more reviews.
Submitted by Fungah (user info) at 2006-11-14 16:48:57 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
ORGASMOOOO
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-11-14 16:31:52 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
This story sounds familiar to me.
It's beautiful.