Unaccomplished (577 hits)
Category: GeneralRating: -0.4 on 20 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Life101 (View user info) at 2006-12-11 01:21:27 EST
Not the best...
What's to say? I used to spend too much time on this site. I was like any new addict craving a hit. And then something happened maybe it was less time, more apathy or just laziness. It was the same old trend of my life so far. Things come and go, some stronger than others while others will always stick with me to the day I die. And I pray it is not what I think will be my last thoughts on my death bed. I am a dreamer lost in the chaotic shuffle of reality and life could not get worse. Every day when the alarm clock goes off it is the worst day of the year. I don't even need it to go off because I have become such a machine instead of a human I rise at the time the alarm sounds. I like so many others get up dress shower eat and go off into the day which I know will do nothing more than depress me and piss me off. I will come home and do the same routine I always do and then retire. That is when the real thoughts start. Doctors have given so many sleeping pills to help them escape from their life but I have yet to become one of them. As my head hits the pillow old memories begin to flood back. It will seem like I will run through my life from childhood to present. Every emotion I have dealt with comes back in sequence. Old smells that you can never smell again come back to mind, the smell of a house after a long vacation, grandmas cookies, the smell of rain after a storm and then the pictures flood back of old faces and places. The perfect picture of the sunset that you knew would never be as beautiful. The snow falling perfectly onto the ground in the night. The late nights spent doing nothing but remembering old friends and laughs. Those times are long gone. You will live your life one day at a time but certain things never let go of you. Someday you will be reminded of that perfect sunrise on the car ride to work. Some perfume will leave you with only a memory of that once in a life time smell that nothing can ever quite match. Those moments that you wish you could freeze in time and return to over and over again are long gone and rare. The one reason to live is to revisit those old thoughts, I wake only for the hope that this day I will have one of those perfect moments where I am once again at peace with everything else.
User Reviews
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2006-12-11 20:15:18 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Nice paragraph.
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2006-12-11 19:59:14 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
"your are"
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uhg.
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2006-12-11 19:58:38 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
solid meh.
Use better formatting if your are going to wax philosophical - the content is good, but tends to get a little e-mo(ish).
Submitted by showfishorama (user info) at 2006-12-11 19:20:57 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I used to not like you.
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2006-12-11 17:29:45 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
Listen to Phil Collins 'Invisible Touch'
Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2006-12-11 13:23:04 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
I don't mind the formatting. This seems to be stream of consciousness, and the look of it suits the material.
Submitted by phuzzygish (user info) at 2006-12-11 11:39:38 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
I'm in a grump today, so I'm vaguely agreeing.
Submitted by beauxjizzle (user info) at 2006-12-11 11:05:53 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
no boobies? im not reading all that.
Submitted by Axolotl (user info) at 2006-12-11 08:28:01 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
suicide. immediately.
Submitted by goferforhire (user info) at 2006-12-11 08:28:00 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Manamana
Submitted by Maltese (user info) at 2006-12-11 08:13:09 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Good, but next time, USE PARAGRAPHS!!!
Submitted by Timmaaaaah (user info) at 2006-12-11 03:24:52 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Holy Focaccia!!
Submitted by jfreakman (user info) at 2006-12-11 02:35:03 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
User id: 27776
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Cause yours is just so much fucking better.
Who the fuck are you again? I've been here for years, dumbass. This is a new account. Good job on noticing that.
Oh, btw, it wouldn't matter if I was new or not. You can't write. Go and learn a basic understanding of the English language, then post. You know, punctuation, sentence breaks, stuff that you should have learned before you were 12.
In short, fuck off.
Submitted by SPECIALk (user info) at 2006-12-11 02:34:47 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
yeah, the formatting sucks and there are run on sentences galore, but i can appreciate the sentiment
Submitted by jfreakman (user info) at 2006-12-11 02:24:18 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
nope, takes 10 reviews.
sorry chap.
Submitted by Life101 (user info) at 2006-12-11 02:07:56 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
well good off the front page! but i must say
Everything you ever wanted to know about jfreakman
User id: 28779
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Submitted by jfreakman (user info) at 2006-12-11 02:02:46 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
yep.
Submitted by Blinkish (user info) at 2006-12-11 01:54:54 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
"not the best" is not a warning it's a fucking understatment. If you know it's crap, why post it? And without proper format its unreadable.
Submitted by Life101 (user info) at 2006-12-11 01:41:37 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
You got warned at the start. Not the best...
Submitted by Bubba2341 (user info) at 2006-12-11 01:29:11 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
The title should have been "Uneducated." A total lack of proper punctuation and paragraphing
made this a struggle to read. It didn't say much, either.