I always thought I was good - when she brought home the Good Eater Award it sealed the deal (1235 hits)
Category: RomanceRating: 1.74 on 56 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Sacrilicious (View user info) at 2007-01-10 16:21:21 EST
I seek out both the hardest and softest places of her body. I kiss the back of her neck, low, where the tendons holding her head create the first soft valley, feeling the small downy hairs rise in anticipation, her head always falls to the side and rests cupped in my hand.
I circle her, like a predator stalking prey, hands restless roaming up and down feeling the smooth surfaces of her body, warm to my touch and trembling when the right places are met with my rough hot hands. I know this body of hers as well as I know my own; I've grown accustomed to exploring it in the dark.
My mouth moves around the side of her neck lips brushing against then grabbing an earlobe, tugging and sucking hungrily...as she pushes her form against mine my mouth travels again. Down the side of her neck I can feel her pulse, the heartbeat pushing against my lips. My breath always seems to match the pounding of her heart, the only thing that gives her away at this point.
... her collar bone, just dragging my lips across it lightly. Never fully pressing or enclosing the hard edge in my mouth. This is the only part, this soft tickle, that makes her cry out, a soft whimper, nothing more.
Then the point where the chest meets the arm and curves under, soft and always hot, when my tongue caresses this point, at first she pulls back, the tender first touches tickle, but then this piece too opens to the wet and eager touch of my lips, my tongue. At the opening I smell her scent, softer than her sex, but still pushing thought from my mind...except the desire to further know her body.
I trail down her entire body, tasting, touching, and smelling. My hands always moving, sometimes gliding across her body like air against air, sometimes my hand stops short against the friction, pulling her skin tight, moving her body a little closer to mine each time it happens.
Her breasts, perfect, small and firm, eager to meet my mouth, she thrusts them forward to meet my tongue, my lips...
Her hard stomach, curving in and out with the now panting breaths, I trail my tongue down the line that defines her abdomen, splits her...
Down her legs, long and muscled, to her feet, I put each toe in my mouth, briefly suckle and let go...
My hands and mouth reap the benefit of the origami that nature performs on the female form, creating soft mysterious folds. These soft intersections that my mouth seeks out always smell of ripe peaches, dry musk, salt.
My hand always seeks out the place where her thigh becomes her ass. The softest place on her body, it feels soft as tissue, as if too hard a touch would rip it open. My hand finds it as her leg curls up and over my shoulder and back, the soft rounded muscle of her calf dragging against my back and drawing me, my mouth, closer to her.
...she's always so silent, the only audible noise the sounds her body makes moving against the cool sheets with the rhythm of my caress coupled with an occasional soft moan, barely there, as if she had to fight to contain it and lost at the end. The first giveaway is the sudden sharp intake of her breath, then her back arches, she presses against me, hard enough to hurt sometimes... I fulfill her hunger and mine a the same time.
...this before she rubs the softest piece of herself against the deepest, the most secret piece of myself, putting it to rest, even if only for a small while.......
User Reviews
Submitted by hidden101 (user info) at 2007-01-15 19:07:18 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
good stuff
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2007-01-15 18:57:28 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Wicked (user info) at 2007-01-15 11:20:40 (#)
Ranking: 2
coley wtf 'gave you wood'
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clearly you didn't read this. Or imagine it. Or breathe heavily whilst touching yourself to its imagery.
neither did I.
Submitted by Wicked (user info) at 2007-01-15 11:20:40 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
coley wtf 'gave you wood'
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-01-12 18:27:25 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Hi Matty. This is a very prestigious award.
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2007-01-12 18:24:15 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by darko (user info) at 2007-01-12 01:42:49 (#)
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Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2007-01-12 01:13:07 (#)
Ranking: 2
thats because the visual of two women touching junk is more aesthetically pleasing scourge.
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this point could be classified as 'good'
hello Valerie dear
Submitted by MyTeeOne (user info) at 2007-01-12 18:12:26 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
You or scourge, that's good writing.
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2007-01-12 08:56:50 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by darko (user info) at 2007-01-12 01:42:49 EST (#)
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Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2007-01-12 01:13:07 (#)
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thats because the visual of two women touching junk is more aesthetically pleasing scourge.
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2007-01-12 01:13:07 EST (#)
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thats because the visual of two women touching junk is more aesthetically pleasing scourge.
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2007-01-11 11:03:12 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by pen_name (user info) at 2007-01-10 22:06:07 (#)
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Submitted by Ducky (user info) at 2007-01-10 21:44:07 (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2007-01-10 21:27:09 (#)
Ranking: 2
I'm sad that jack didnt like it when I stole his post.
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Console yourself with the visual Sacrilicious has so eloquently created for you.
Again Sac., your writing is really good.
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Probably the best writing on uber, if this post is an example of her ability.
I guess they liked it better when you posted it than when I did. It has a better rating here.
Submitted by goferforhire (user info) at 2007-01-11 10:39:42 EST (#)
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http://www.ubersite.com/m/97442
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-01-10 17:17:32 (#)
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Oh, I didn't write this. scourge did. But where's your smut?
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Be happy I didn't respond with 'up your butt and around the corner!' Because I'm totally in that sort of mood right now.
It's actually not that smutty at all, which was my point.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-01-11 09:21:41 EST (#)
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I've learned a valuable lesson here.
Submitted by MyNameIsTim (user info) at 2007-01-11 07:01:19 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
eroticstories.com
Submitted by Danger_Ranger (user info) at 2007-01-11 05:53:47 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
gross
Submitted by JoeyG (user info) at 2007-01-11 05:26:08 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2007-01-10 16:26:39 (#)
Ranking: 2
this is so fucking hot it made my nipples rip two perfectly circular holes through my shirt
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This had the same effect on me, and I was wearing a kevlar vest underneath.
Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2007-01-11 02:36:46 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Perverts
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2007-01-11 01:44:18 EST (#)
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This gave me wood.
Submitted by lungfish (user info) at 2007-01-10 23:05:13 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I think it moved.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-01-10 23:00:59 EST (#)
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I totally still speak to your bathing suit area.
And you owe me a Bella Donna clip.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-01-10 22:56:01 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2007-01-10 21:26:48 (#)
Ranking: 2
awesome
hey um because you posted this I had this insane visual of two women rubbing their junk together and jesus christ it was hot.
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FINALLY SOMEONE ELSE USES IT FOR CHICKS.
We are brothers in "she-junk," rad. I will be sending you a vial of my blood, for swapping purposes.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-01-10 22:48:05 EST (#)
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Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-01-10 21:35:52 (#)
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I'm sad more people don't read filenames:(
I have a video with Jenna doing that with another woman. Hot hot. Only I just had an argument with O the other day about use of "junk"- I claim it's only for use in regards to men and he said no. I bet he comes and calls me out now that you used it too. Damnation.
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"Junk," while most humorously associated with male genitalia, is, to me, a catch-all term for the organs of the bathing suit area. Chicks have labial "junk" as much as fellas have danglish "junk."
That is all.
PS - You owe me a Tera Patrick "O face."
Submitted by pen_name (user info) at 2007-01-10 22:25:21 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
A wonderful talent
Submitted by pen_name (user info) at 2007-01-10 22:25:08 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Spectacular!
Submitted by pen_name (user info) at 2007-01-10 22:24:56 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I read it again. WOW!
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-01-10 22:11:26 EST (#)
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Guys- your words are kind, but they aren't for me. I wish I could write like this. It's a joke, in response to scourge's post today. He deserves the praise.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-01-10 20:57:56 (#)
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bandwagon + filename, kitty cats-
http://www.ubersite.com/m/81867
mmm
Submitted by pen_name (user info) at 2007-01-10 22:06:07 EST (#)
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Submitted by Ducky (user info) at 2007-01-10 21:44:07 (#)
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Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2007-01-10 21:27:09 (#)
Ranking: 2
I'm sad that jack didnt like it when I stole his post.
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Console yourself with the visual Sacrilicious has so eloquently created for you.
Again Sac., your writing is really good.
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Probably the best writing on uber, if this post is an example of her ability.
Submitted by Ducky (user info) at 2007-01-10 21:44:07 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2007-01-10 21:27:09 (#)
Ranking: 2
I'm sad that jack didnt like it when I stole his post.
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Console yourself with the visual Sacrilicious has so eloquently created for you.
Again Sac., your writing is really good.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-01-10 21:35:52 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
I'm sad more people don't read filenames:(
I have a video with Jenna doing that with another woman. Hot hot. Only I just had an argument with O the other day about use of "junk"- I claim it's only for use in regards to men and he said no. I bet he comes and calls me out now that you used it too. Damnation.
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2007-01-10 21:27:09 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I'm sad that jack didnt like it when I stole his post.
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2007-01-10 21:26:48 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
awesome
hey um because you posted this I had this insane visual of two women rubbing their junk together and jesus christ it was hot.
Submitted by Ducky (user info) at 2007-01-10 21:26:29 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Very nice.
Submitted by pen_name (user info) at 2007-01-10 21:21:12 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Man, Sac, this is the best post you've ever done. Write more of this. It's great!
Submitted by Falafel (user info) at 2007-01-10 21:18:28 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Very well written, but I feel I must address one point:
Then the point where the chest meets the arm and curves under, soft and always hot, when my tongue caresses this point
Did you lick her armpit? What the Christ?
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-01-10 20:57:56 EST (#)
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bandwagon + filename, kitty cats-
http://www.ubersite.com/m/81867
mmm
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2007-01-10 20:47:39 EST (#)
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... there was touching.
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2007-01-10 20:35:26 EST (#)
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Were you eating beave here?
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2007-01-10 19:34:39 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
so well done that it made me uncomfortable.
Submitted by i_can_get_you_a_toe (user info) at 2007-01-10 18:53:09 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Well I guess i could thank you for not sticking it up your ass
Submitted by LittleMonster (user info) at 2007-01-10 18:07:52 EST (#)
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*blinks*
*gulps air*
Welldone.
Submitted by Axolotl (user info) at 2007-01-10 17:19:33 EST (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-01-10 17:17:32 EST (#)
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Oh, I didn't write this. scourge did. But where's your smut?
Submitted by goferforhire (user info) at 2007-01-10 17:15:15 EST (#)
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Every time I accidentally write something vaguely smutty you show me up. Good show!
But seriously, this is well done.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-01-10 17:12:38 EST (#)
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AND THE (ACTUAL) AWARD GOES TO...
SCOURGEOFTHESEAS
Submitted by Amontillado (user info) at 2007-01-10 17:05:06 EST (#)
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hawt
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2007-01-10 17:01:12 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by homer42 (user info) at 2007-01-10 16:50:01 (#)
Ranking: -2
stupid... although i see many are greatful for the spank material you've provided them with...
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why dont you post something then, shitty alter?
Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2007-01-10 16:55:06 EST (#)
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i just throw it in, come, then get back to eating burgers
Submitted by homer42 (user info) at 2007-01-10 16:50:01 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
stupid... although i see many are greatful for the spank material you've provided them with...
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-01-10 16:35:03 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Sounds like Ghola Dear™ is one lucky girl.
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2007-01-10 16:34:15 EST (#)
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Sorry
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2007-01-10 16:34:06 EST (#)
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Ooops
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2007-01-10 16:33:56 EST (#)
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Fuck
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2007-01-10 16:33:43 EST (#)
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Gah
Submitted by marginwalker (user info) at 2007-01-10 16:32:14 EST (#)
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I'm fervent.
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2007-01-10 16:31:11 EST (#)
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Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2007-01-10 16:26:39 (#)
Ranking: 2
this is so fucking hot it made my nipples rip two perfectly circular holes through my shirt
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Ahahahahah!
You might get a kick out of this Sacri:
http://www.ubersite.com/m/43889
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2007-01-10 16:26:39 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
this is so fucking hot it made my nipples rip two perfectly circular holes through my shirt
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2007-01-10 16:26:01 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
what other recipes do you know?