For better or worse. (1131 hits)
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Submitted by Lisa (View user info) at 2007-01-21 07:09:53 EST
Do you remember when you were a pathetic shell of a person, and I coached you towards normalcy every day, because I believed you were worth more than you ever knew? Do you remember when you were fragile and my faith in your strength motivated you to scrape yourself up off the floor? You were in terrible shape, but I knew you had the power to be incredible. You wanted someone besides yourself to believe in your potential in order to make the fight worthwhile.
I'm sorry that I'm weak and imperfect, and I couldn't always support you as much as you would have liked. I've always loved you, I've always had deep respect for your perpetual effort to be a good person, and I always hoped you would become everything I knew you could be.
I wanted your love most of all. If I can't have that forever, I want your friendship and your loyalty. Be my family. Be a soldier for me and in return I won't betray you in any way. Support me, not for my causes, but because I'm me. If I know you're my ally I'll never abandon you. If you admit that you don't understand my desire for loyalty above all, and my complete willingness to return that allegiance, I'll know I'm pleading with the wrong person.
You have more power than anyone to make me angry. You make me so angry that my stomach churns and my throat closes up, and the thought of your hands anywhere near my body makes me shiver in disgust. Betrayed or disrespected by the person I value most, I don't know what to do with myself. My head spins, I forget why I'm doing what I do. You piss me off over and over. Still, I know that I'll keep returning to check up on you, like a pitiful, kicked dog, because I don't have a choice. I love you unconditionally, even when I hate you.
User Reviews
Submitted by Fabish (user info) at 2007-01-31 21:23:24 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
It's almost like you're in my head writing my life. Get the hell out!
Submitted by RenTheUnsightly (user info) at 2007-01-29 01:19:17 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
I remember your love, Lisa. It made me come gravy trains. Hey, seriously though, you's cool. lolz. rotfl. mao.
Submitted by corn_nugget (user info) at 2007-01-25 23:30:51 EST (#)
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"flip your bitch switch" what a stupid comment.
Anyway. You're an enigma- super private yet revealing all.
Submitted by forthewin (user info) at 2007-01-24 18:30:40 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I like you cause you're a bitch.
(talking about your reviews)
Submitted by Quint (user info) at 2007-01-24 18:10:12 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
Man
Submitted by Caulaincourt (user info) at 2007-01-24 02:39:03 EST (#)
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How much does it pay to donate our semen?
Submitted by Flack (user info) at 2007-01-23 10:35:07 EST (#)
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meh
Submitted by Durae (user info) at 2007-01-23 10:27:04 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Not to rain on your parade or anything. =/
Submitted by Durae (user info) at 2007-01-23 10:25:58 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
There are crazy medical risks involved with donating eggs. And in some cases, if I remember correctly, you run the risk of the company not covering the full cost of complications. It's an incredibly invasive procedure, as well as the process itself being potentially debilitating what with all the fertility drugs they pump into your system.
I thought it was a great idea at first too, but I'm afraid of needles and there are a LOT of needles involved.
Submitted by Lisa (user info) at 2007-01-22 23:37:29 EST (#)
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Oh, and make a bunch of infertile couples happy. Everybody wins!
Submitted by Lisa (user info) at 2007-01-22 23:37:01 EST (#)
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You know you get $7000 for donating an egg? I could donate one every month for the rest of my childbearing years, get rich, AND work actively towards my goal of creating a super race of attractive, extraordinarily intelligent, highly effective human beings.
Submitted by MyTeeOne (user info) at 2007-01-22 17:29:08 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
I just don't know how to feel about this piece. The emotion was good, but the story lacked.
Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2007-01-22 17:12:44 EST (#)
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Submitted by Lisa (user info) at 2007-01-21 16:55:58 (#)
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I don't have kaos-king's email address...
:'(
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HA! Fair play...
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2007-01-22 14:34:28 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
+1 for not being a crappy Canadian comic strip
Submitted by mrez (user info) at 2007-01-22 12:50:58 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I liked this a lot.
Submitted by icarus1987 (user info) at 2007-01-22 12:26:53 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by Caulaincourt (user info) at 2007-01-21 23:43:46 (#)
Ranking: -2
that read like julia's stiles poem in 10 things i hate about you.
use email next time, salope.
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That's the beauty of it, really. You've got the teen angst poetry, which is FOLLOWED by Heath Ledger getting the flat-chested girl, and Tommy from Third Rock getting the cute girl, and the gay big-nosed model kid is all *WEEPS*. Then some girl band's playing on the roof of a high school that looks suspiciously like Hogwarts.
But not quite.
Don't pretend you don't know what I'm talking about, bitches.
Submitted by Badlands (user info) at 2007-01-22 10:52:13 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I get this. There is always that one person who makes your heart leap and at the same time makes you feel like you swallowed a 50lb lead weight. It gets easier, but it never goes away completely.
Submitted by jfreakman (user info) at 2007-01-22 00:23:49 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
You sound like my bitter emo ex-girlfriend.
Except when she sounded like that, she was 17. What's your excuse?
Submitted by Caulaincourt (user info) at 2007-01-21 23:43:46 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
that read like julia's stiles poem in 10 things i hate about you.
use email next time, salope.
Submitted by Crystle (user info) at 2007-01-21 22:09:32 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2007-01-21 20:59:23 EST (#)
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I WANT YOU IN MY PANTS
Submitted by scum101 (user info) at 2007-01-21 19:18:03 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
some of you sad dickless wonders make me sick.
Submitted by Zebra (user info) at 2007-01-21 18:19:59 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
I will be glad to proofread your asshole in braille.
Submitted by Herpes (user info) at 2007-01-21 17:49:17 EST (#)
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Sarcasm. haha
Submitted by Lisa (user info) at 2007-01-21 17:07:08 EST (#)
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hahaha
Submitted by Bubba2341 (user info) at 2007-01-21 17:05:48 EST (#)
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Submitted by Lisa (user info) at 2007-01-21 16:55:58 (#)
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I don't have kaos-king's email address...
:'(
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One of your towering intellect should be able to find it in a post.
He's probably put it out there a dozen times...
Submitted by Lisa (user info) at 2007-01-21 16:55:58 EST (#)
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I don't have kaos-king's email address...
:'(
Submitted by strwbryfanatic (user info) at 2007-01-21 16:49:54 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Not that I'm trying to flip your bitch switch or anything, but I think you should have probably emailed this to whoever it was meant for instead of submitting it here.
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2007-01-21 15:38:56 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
...one post a day, douche.
Submitted by Kracka (user info) at 2007-01-21 14:51:46 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2007-01-21 14:06:23 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
hidden been cornholing other bitches again?
not cool stumpy not cool.
Hey did he need to stand on a stool to kiss you?
I like the post.
Submitted by Istaros (user info) at 2007-01-21 13:58:00 EST (#)
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eh, i can relate to this surprisingly well
grammar's fine
Submitted by Genko (user info) at 2007-01-21 13:38:28 EST (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by hairycoo (user info) at 2007-01-21 13:31:58 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
hahaha get off the weed
Submitted by Bubba2341 (user info) at 2007-01-21 13:09:29 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Lisa (user info) at 2007-01-21 08:28:01 (#)
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There's a reason for "wanted" followed by "can't" and "want." It makes sense in the context. You don't know the context. Also, there are very few people on Ubersite qualified to correct my grammar; you're not one of them. Proofread my asshole.
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There is nothing wrong with the grammar or 'tenses' in this piece. One may speak in the present while referring to the past in past tense. Kids today don't have the skills to be grammar Nazis.
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2007-01-21 12:29:45 EST (#)
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:)
Submitted by hot_pocket (user info) at 2007-01-21 12:27:06 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by DCWoody (user info) at 2007-01-21 12:15:09 EST (#)
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Submitted by Dolson (user info) at 2007-01-21 11:34:51 EST (#)
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Submitted by Lisa (user info) at 2007-01-21 08:28:01 (#)
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There's a reason for "wanted" followed by "can't" and "want." It makes sense in the context. You don't know the context. Also, there are very few people on Ubersite qualified to correct my grammar; you're not one of them. Proofread my asshole.
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I am qualified, and it seems fine (especially by relative standards).
Although I have to say, the "proofread my asshole" bit is goddamn funny.
Submitted by lungfish (user info) at 2007-01-21 11:00:29 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
No offense, but what the fuck are you on about?
Submitted by tammy (user info) at 2007-01-21 10:34:41 EST (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2007-01-21 10:21:07 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
I guess this is the "worse" part, eh?
Submitted by Timmaaaaah (user info) at 2007-01-21 10:11:00 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
meh
meh
meh
Submitted by thecaes (user info) at 2007-01-21 09:32:10 EST (#)
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I have a strange admiration for you that I can't explain, Lisa. Good luck.
Submitted by IntangibleHands (user info) at 2007-01-21 09:23:21 EST (#)
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http://www.livejournal.com
Submitted by Stagger_Lee (user info) at 2007-01-21 09:11:09 EST (#)
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que?
Submitted by Lisa (user info) at 2007-01-21 09:08:45 EST (#)
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Maybe.
Submitted by ripple (user info) at 2007-01-21 08:56:34 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
also, being really attatched to what you write is kind of obnoxious. just my worthless opinion.
...can i kiss your feet?
Submitted by ripple (user info) at 2007-01-21 08:54:52 EST (#)
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chill out. few people are qualified to correct anything. i just didnt like it. happy?
Submitted by WookieSuave (user info) at 2007-01-21 08:30:30 EST (#)
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Now.....I know this is a little forward, and out of context....
But can I kiss your asshole?
Submitted by Lisa (user info) at 2007-01-21 08:28:01 EST (#)
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There's a reason for "wanted" followed by "can't" and "want." It makes sense in the context. You don't know the context. Also, there are very few people on Ubersite qualified to correct my grammar; you're not one of them. Proofread my asshole.
Submitted by WookieSuave (user info) at 2007-01-21 08:22:10 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Allright... Who feels like a dick for breaking up with his last girlfriend?
Oh, it's me
Submitted by Phallic_Cymbals (user info) at 2007-01-21 07:43:26 EST (#)
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Yeh Jesus is a helluva guy.
Submitted by ripple (user info) at 2007-01-21 07:43:06 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
kind of lacking. extremely short, but not complete. watch tenses, too. maybe proofread a touch.
i wrote something kind of similar a while ago- see http://www.ubersite.com/m/89847
these tend to be kind of hit-or-miss.