some dark poems (231 hits)
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Submitted by Casus Belli (View user info) at 2007-02-03 15:06:13 EST
Hi guys. I see ThaT a lOt of you seeM to rag on poeTry so I've decided to "enlighTen" you with sOme of the poeMs I wrote for my English classes.
Enjoy lol : )
Is there anyone out there?
Anyone who cares?
Mounting tension and hatred
There are no stars
There are no stars
Over the hills
My voice goes unheard
Your voice is too loud
Our footprints too deep
Under dark skies we walk
Down long tunnels we run
I cannot see
People cannot breathe
Sometime we will see
Having is not all there is
In life
There is death
Sadness is our ruler
Silver rain
Has soaked my skin
Life it seems has conspired
Overcoming all that I am
No one else has noticed
Going down this road
You and your son
Run
Under the sun
Let the rain soak your skin
Earths own tears
Soak the ground
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Submitted by Maddog (user info) at 2007-02-03 16:17:13 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Sounds like lyrics to a Depeche Mode song.
Submitted by hot_pocket (user info) at 2007-02-03 16:09:40 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
poo
Submitted by Sinistral (user info) at 2007-02-03 15:55:43 EST (#)
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Submitted by Foolproof (user info) at 2007-02-03 15:44:11 (#)
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Hi guys. I see ThaT a lOt of you seeM to rag on poeTry so I've decided to "enlighTen" you with sOme of the poeMs I wrote for my English classes.
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T-O-M
T-T-O-M
Every capital letter.
TTOM's alter?
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genius
Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2007-02-03 15:48:46 EST (#)
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You really didn't think this would go over well, did you???
Submitted by Foolproof (user info) at 2007-02-03 15:44:11 EST (#)
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Hi guys. I see ThaT a lOt of you seeM to rag on poeTry so I've decided to "enlighTen" you with sOme of the poeMs I wrote for my English classes.
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T-O-M
T-T-O-M
Every capital letter.
TTOM's alter?
Submitted by Antioxident (user info) at 2007-02-03 15:40:35 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by Axolotl (user info) at 2007-02-03 15:08:49 (#)
Ranking: -2
I logged in just to -2 this.
Submitted by Genko (user info) at 2007-02-03 15:30:46 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
If I were your English teacher, I'd have you expelled.
Submitted by HurtByTheSun (user info) at 2007-02-03 15:09:45 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
Is there anyone out there?
Anyone who cares?
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Not so much.
Submitted by Axolotl (user info) at 2007-02-03 15:09:07 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
ps nice Pink Floyd rip off.
Submitted by Axolotl (user info) at 2007-02-03 15:08:49 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
I logged in just to -2 this.