I would cry, but the stitches haven't come out (456 hits)
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Submitted by InkyFingers (View user info) at 2007-02-05 16:41:26 EST
One hand in the pocket to pull the lighter, and one hand around his neck to pull his face to the lighter. He's tied to heavy sink piping and no size to worry about. Sprawled out in his blood, face a goddamn wreck, straw limbs scattered under him like a bird nest. Sadistic tendancy I suppose, standing wallowing in the easy win. GOnna be tougher from here out. But I got guts and heart and half a brain, and I can use them all together better than most.
"Where's the truth?"
"There is no truth you faggot. There's just one person versus the next beleiveing what they believe. Everyone working to convince as many people as possible that they're understand existnce from beginning to end."
"Come here." and I pull his face to the flame. "There was a little girl here yesterday and she's my niece. You tell me where she is. That's the truth I want and you're going to tell me, or I'm going to show you last truth of life."
"Your a mad man, there is no little girl and there is no truth. Get outta my house."
I punch him in the face and burn his cheek with the lighter. Might have kicked him, too. He talks.
Heading out the door I hear his dog still barking from the back yard. I'm headed that way. Here poochie. I have a way with animals. They like me, I like them. I dig a handfull of kibbles out of a box and toss it to the floor. Good pooch.
Got my answers. Headed for downtown next. Some clinic stuffed nowhere surrounded by garbage and shattered window stores. I got a lead and it's all i needed.
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Submitted by Maltese (user info) at 2007-02-06 15:25:45 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by jfreakman (user info) at 2007-02-05 23:19:34 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Seems like I was missing something, here.
No, wait, it's your story missing something. Like a plot, a direction, a backstory, a future...?
Submitted by St_Jimmy (user info) at 2007-02-05 20:34:14 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
"straw limbs scattered under him like a bird nest"
Soon as I read that, this became about a guy torturing the scarecrow to find Dorothy. That and the "I got heart, a half a brain..." comment.
Auntie Em is one bad motherfucker!
Submitted by hot_pocket (user info) at 2007-02-05 19:23:33 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
what happened here? i think i walked into the movie half way through...
Submitted by Hookhand (user info) at 2007-02-05 18:23:45 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
B@W
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2007-02-05 17:29:54 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Tentative +2 in the hope this goes somewhere.
Submitted by Adamdidit2u (user info) at 2007-02-05 17:16:02 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Maltese (user info) at 2007-02-05 16:49:53 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
This was really fucking good.
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2007-02-05 16:49:27 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
needs a plot
Submitted by The_Drake (user info) at 2007-02-05 16:46:53 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
.........and?