Children of the Ghetto (ADD) (451 hits)
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Submitted by Beano (View user info) at 2007-02-18 14:13:35 EST
Children of the Ghetto
I'd robbed three people by lunchtime and had a hefty fifty dollars to show for it. Two of those would probably survive but one was definitely dead when I left the scene, he was the one I took the iPod from. That was one of the reasons I had fifty dollars, my fence giving me 30 dollars for the iPod alone.
One had nothing about him at all, I took his digital watch but they are worthless, only five dollars. With fifteen dollars in the wallet of the third victim that completed the picture. One dead and two quite probably seriously injured.
I had a one o'clock appointment with a western businessman at a hotel around the corner that I didn't want to miss because of the money it paid. I could handle the pain and disgust I felt for that sweet sweet one hundred dollars.
Presently I was in his room, sucking on his tiny sweaty penis, he always sweated so much when he came here. I guess he is used to air conditioned rooms and a cooler climate. I knew the next move, I'd done it fifteen or twenty times by now. He'd just about be ready to cum, then he'd step away from me and spend ten minutes looking at my bare ass and talking dirty to me, telling me what he was going to do. Then he'd fuck me. It always hurt my anus for a few days after but it was worth the pain.
By two fifteen I was back on the street. It was now time to find a hit. And of course when I say find, I didn't have to look too hard. Plenty of other boys sold crack but I always went to the same guy if I could. He beats me so fucking hard if I buy from anyone else that it really isn't worth the hassle.
So a grab a load of wraps from him and take the ones that he offers me on credit. I always think how kind he is when he does that.
Rounding up my two closest friends we head for a derelict building. Hoping that we aren't going to find a dead prostitute like last time, rotting in the corner.
Once there, we all get high, injecting into any part of our body that isn't already shot to fuck. This is going to last a good few hours (as I suspect that the drugs we get aren't that pure) and take into early evening when there was yet more fun to be had on the street.
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Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2008-07-26 12:41:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by Mr_T (user info) at 2008-07-23 20:22:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I don't hate you...
but I pity the foo'!
Submitted by maf54 (user info) at 2008-05-14 05:18:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Just to counter what that idiot Director did to you.
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2008-05-13 17:32:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by rorrim (user info) at 2007-02-19 06:40:10 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Having this one bubbling in the mind for a day , the rate goes up to +2 .
Cool post , will probably end up in some nightmare ...
Submitted by particle_man58 (user info) at 2007-02-19 05:55:16 EST (#)
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yikes
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2007-02-19 03:09:21 EST (#)
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Submitted by ballsonurchin (user info) at 2007-02-19 01:35:26 (#)
Ranking: -2
I want to punch you in the face
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Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2007-02-19 03:08:56 EST (#)
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Submitted by rick_the_stud (user info) at 2007-02-19 01:14:37 (#)
Ranking: -1
interesting idea, but lacks anything remotely resembling the word "compelling." the character tells a mediocre story in a mediocre way. it's not so much the plot itself as the style. maybe different language choice would be more convincing. plus, i agree, crack is smoked, not injected, hence the reason for its existence.
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Yeah, I realised that after I'd posted, but hey. 'Took some drugs' was a shit line.
Cheers for the feedback.
Submitted by ballsonurchin (user info) at 2007-02-19 01:35:26 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
I want to punch you in the face.
Submitted by rick_the_stud (user info) at 2007-02-19 01:14:37 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
interesting idea, but lacks anything remotely resembling the word "compelling." the character tells a mediocre story in a mediocre way. it's not so much the plot itself as the style. maybe different language choice would be more convincing. plus, i agree, crack is smoked, not injected, hence the reason for its existence.
Submitted by Falafel (user info) at 2007-02-19 00:59:49 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Anybody here seen Requiem For A Dream? Great movie but holy dammit.. if I ever got into drugs I'd never take up anything that involves needles, just because of that. *brr*
Submitted by joedaddy (user info) at 2007-02-18 21:35:24 EST (#)
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Submitted by littledan (user info) at 2007-02-18 20:40:56 (#)
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Who injects crack?
Submitted by littledan (user info) at 2007-02-18 20:40:56 EST (#)
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Who injects crack?
Submitted by locksly (user info) at 2007-02-18 18:16:38 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
sorry beano plus 2
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2007-02-18 17:58:39 EST (#)
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Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2007-02-18 16:30:30 (#)
Ranking: 2
i +2 everything posted as ADD.
good work here beano7654321098(who remembers all those fucking numbers?)
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You can just call me Beano.
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2007-02-18 17:58:09 EST (#)
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Submitted by locksly (user info) at 2007-02-18 17:24:33 (#)
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Submitted by Bubba2341 (user info) at 2007-02-18 15:20:56 (#)
Ranking: 2
Butt-slammin, turd-tappin, rump-wranglin cornhole cowboy!!
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STFU bubba - you were the businessman you fucking lost cunt
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wtf is this all about??
Submitted by locksly (user info) at 2007-02-18 17:24:33 EST (#)
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Submitted by Bubba2341 (user info) at 2007-02-18 15:20:56 (#)
Ranking: 2
Butt-slammin, turd-tappin, rump-wranglin cornhole cowboy!!
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STFU bubba - you were the businessman you fucking lost cunt
Submitted by messmind (user info) at 2007-02-18 17:21:06 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by lungfish (user info) at 2007-02-18 16:51:15 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I'm going to the park.
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2007-02-18 16:30:30 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
i +2 everything posted as ADD.
good work here beano7654321098(who remembers all those fucking numbers?)
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2007-02-18 16:04:46 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
im going to eat banana chips and watch law and order now.
Submitted by hot_pocket (user info) at 2007-02-18 15:29:10 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
not my cup but it was ok
Submitted by Bubba2341 (user info) at 2007-02-18 15:20:56 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Butt-slammin, turd-tappin, rump-wranglin cornhole cowboy!!
Submitted by i_can_get_you_a_toe (user info) at 2007-02-18 15:00:20 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
easy to read
Submitted by Manitou (user info) at 2007-02-18 14:40:53 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Beano = auto +2