ADD Delightfulness (521 hits)
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Rating: 0.35 on 24 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Beano (View user info) at 2007-03-04 07:53:29 EST
The ADD Delightfulness link: http://www.ubersite.com/m/99355
All she wants from this god forsaken life is to love.
She doesn't think its a lot to ask. She had cried herself to sleep cold night after night thinking about the helplessness of her situation. The desperation of wanting to change, but not being empowered to achieve it. Love. Others have it. Lots of others have it. But it has long eluded her.
It isn't so much the pain and misery that makes her so sad as much as the sheer degradation and humiliation of what she has to do on a daily basis that really sends her into deep pits of depression, that she is often sure she won't be able to climb out of.
Sometimes she doesn't want to climb out.
It isn't like this for others, she passes girls on the street all the time who walk hand in hand with another human, be it boy of girl. With some of them you could feel the electricity, the energy that existed between them. She wanted just a small percent of that.
Why not end it? She had asked herself that question on many occasions, and a couple of times had even 'attempted' to do just that. They were weak and feeble attempts, much like her. Never really meant to do anything other than garner some kind of sympathy (and a mild feeling of being wanted and cared for) from whoever it was who discovered her pathetic body and revived her and told her she shouldn't die.
But it was the long distant memory of love and the hope that one day it will return to her that keeps her from dying at her own hand.
It has nothing to do with self pride, or feelings of self worth... just the thought that she could have love. And then she would have it all.
She was such a simple girl. Such small needs from life, yet this had left her broken and alone, a shadow of a human, a passenger - no - a tool of life, to be picked up and used by others as their desire so lead them.
User Reviews
Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2008-07-26 12:36:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
gay
Submitted by Mr_T (user info) at 2008-07-23 20:24:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I don't hate you...
but I pity the foo'!
Submitted by maf54 (user info) at 2008-05-14 05:19:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Just to counter what that idiot Director did to you.
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2008-05-13 17:31:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2007-03-12 04:46:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by ballsonurchin (user info) at 2007-03-11 23:25:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
LOSER.
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BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHA
Submitted by ballsonurchin (user info) at 2007-03-11 23:25:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
LOSER.
Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2007-03-06 12:29:41 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 ADD entry.
Pic really sits well with the text.
Submitted by Timmaaaaah (user info) at 2007-03-05 09:48:20 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I LOVE IT!!!!!
maybe
Submitted by Bubba2341 (user info) at 2007-03-04 20:25:46 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
This wasn't that bad. People are just assholes.
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2007-03-04 14:49:53 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by lungfish (user info) at 2007-03-04 12:21:38 (#)
Ranking: 2
You realize, of course, as does everyone else, that I'm just kissing your ass because I like you.
That's how life works. Not fair, really, but there it is.
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Seems like a good enough reason to me mate.
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2007-03-04 14:12:38 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
i laughed
Submitted by DCWoody (user info) at 2007-03-04 13:00:32 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
Submitted by Zebra (user info) at 2007-03-04 12:33:11 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
No Comment
Submitted by lungfish (user info) at 2007-03-04 12:23:46 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Weird. My first review, posted before the one below, didn't go through. Shame. It was terribly witty.
Submitted by Ducky (user info) at 2007-03-04 12:23:34 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I thought it was decent.
Submitted by lungfish (user info) at 2007-03-04 12:21:38 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
You realize, of course, as does everyone else, that I'm just kissing your ass because I like you.
That's how life works. Not fair, really, but there it is.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-03-04 11:27:27 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 because I'm lonely and crackheads need love too.
Submitted by darko (user info) at 2007-03-04 10:37:22 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
http://www.ubersite.com/m/99378
Submitted by Daccory (user info) at 2007-03-04 09:26:13 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Relatively boring.
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2007-03-04 09:10:41 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Spooner (user info) at 2007-03-04 09:02:53 (#)
Ranking: 0
I agree with Darko. Sorry.
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Don't be, I won't lose any sleep over it.
Its cool.
Submitted by Spooner (user info) at 2007-03-04 09:02:53 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
I agree with Darko. Sorry.
Submitted by BranDo (user info) at 2007-03-04 08:52:52 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
pathetic
she is.
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2007-03-04 08:09:44 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by darko (user info) at 2007-03-04 08:01:07 (#)
Ranking: -1
big fat meh.
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You have no heart !!
Submitted by darko (user info) at 2007-03-04 08:01:07 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
big fat meh.