APW: You Sleep You Dream (1037 hits)
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Submitted by Orgasmatron (View user info) at 2007-03-07 13:46:37 EST
Nightly comes the slowing
And the shade
And in time, in weakness
In time, and restless legs
Running out the day
In steady time,
All things in motion
Perpetual still.
The bloom absent from crossed hands
Will be there one day
In time.
The drummer's heart
Will one day cease its hopeful beating
In time.
The children trapped within the mind
And more
Will spring to bear the fall in time.
Counting out the
Stolen hours spent preparing
For a feast
Never to be enjoyed.
Yet above the thickened blood
And low, tidal respiration
Stoneroll eyes spy glammer and
Glimpse gods in their spinning:
Websilk and fishhooks,
Knifeblade and scattershot,
A plummet, a loose turn
Of a doorknob before adultery,
The dead returning as they were,
The sky, the sky, sable lips
Spitting wolves and serpents,
Firedance and poison blood,
Walk with us a while, come,
Come, the sirens sing in harmony,
A famine, a flood, old air
In black lungs breathing,
Stale the day and dry the night,
Snowblind and blisterburn,
Bones, and the guilt of every
Remembered trespass.
Drowning in waking waters
Surfacing alive
In time,
Knowing that in time
The sirens will always win the day.
You sleep,
You dream you die.
You sleep,
You dream,
You die.
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Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-06-04 10:17:05 EDT (#)
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Oh what it is with all the question marks you pants-fancy wank?
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-06-03 17:35:10 EDT (#)
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You know, you can can just come right out and ask your question, Jake. It's obviously bothering you.
Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2007-06-03 17:18:44 EDT (#)
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well that didn't work.
Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2007-06-03 17:18:28 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-03-27 21:20:46 EDT (#)
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reval
Submitted by messmind (user info) at 2007-03-08 05:59:03 EST (#)
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Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-03-07 22:48:39 EST (#)
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hahahahahaha!
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2007-03-08 01:26:47 EST (#)
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Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-03-07 13:50:19 EST (#)
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I totally dreamed that I kissed the new man at work last night.
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I totally dreamed that I snuggled in my bathrobe with a man last night.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-03-07 22:54:29 EST (#)
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Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-03-07 22:48:39 EST (#)
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feety would love that song.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-03-07 22:47:00 EST (#)
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True below.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-03-07 22:42:31 EST (#)
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It took me longer to pee and make tea today than it did for you to write this AND to tell me what glammer was.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-03-07 22:37:52 EST (#)
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No it was all written straight through without any rearrangement or edits.
Well, this part was done first:
You sleep,
You dream you die.
You sleep,
You dream,
You die.
In fact, I considered just posting that along with the painting and calling it a day. Then I figured I could do more and set about finding what else was kicking around inside my head. I have a feeling that the part you referenced was around when I slipped into a more comfortable form. It's more in line with what I've been doing lately. The rest...well who knows.
Submitted by Stagger_Lee (user info) at 2007-03-07 22:29:05 EST (#)
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That verse (or stanza or whatever you call them) that starts with "yet above the thickened blood" is pretty good. It's like you had that written and dropped it in with the rest of it, cos it's better than the rest of it and seems out of place. But that's just me.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-03-07 22:27:19 EST (#)
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You should search for "Fuseli" and "Nightmare" Stag. There's at least one other piece that involves these figures...more of a vertical presentation. Pick which one you like more.
I may do something with another of his paintings in the coming weeks.
Submitted by Stagger_Lee (user info) at 2007-03-07 21:35:53 EST (#)
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I did not care for this poem very much, it's ok but not one of your best. But goddamn that's an awesome painting.
Submitted by gank (user info) at 2007-03-07 18:15:49 EST (#)
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Submitted by DesolateMisanthrope (user info) at 2007-03-07 17:28:54 EST (#)
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they say sleep is the cousin of death.
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Nas said that, on his first (and best) album "Illmatic".
Submitted by MidnightToSix (user info) at 2007-03-07 18:04:14 EST (#)
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Submitted by Brandnamecommercial (user info) at 2007-03-07 17:52:35 EST (#)
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+2 for the picture;
for the record, this is gothik fantasy work by Fuseli: The creature is an incubus, a Swedish(?) creature that is said to enter the dreams of virgins and give them disturbing erotic dreams. The incubis rides on the horse of night (night-mare)
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-03-07 17:38:59 EST (#)
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The Greeks, when selling crazy back in the day, offered that sleep (Hypnos) and death (Thanatos) were brothers.
However, one of the words above has four syllables so I'm not expecting you to have much to say.
Submitted by DesolateMisanthrope (user info) at 2007-03-07 17:28:54 EST (#)
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they say sleep is the cousin of death.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-03-07 17:02:52 EST (#)
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There, that's better.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-03-07 17:02:07 EST (#)
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Oh no.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-03-07 17:01:54 EST (#)
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Please, like that's your password.
p.s.- I changed your password.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-03-07 16:58:16 EST (#)
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Please, like that's your password.
p.s.- I changed your password.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-03-07 16:54:01 EST (#)
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F. FUSELI.
I'm going to shut up now.
username: Orgasmatron
password: monkeyhatesex
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-03-07 16:53:16 EST (#)
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Submitted by JoeyG (user info) at 2007-03-07 16:47:33 EST (#)
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So, she sleeps with an orc, AND lets the evil horse watch?
Boy, is she off my regular whore list.
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Hmm...I do loves me the concept of Irregular Whores.
Looks like the Fusili ripoff couldn't save that movie, Cyrus. Poor Gabriel Byrne.
Submitted by zakalwe (user info) at 2007-03-07 16:48:31 EST (#)
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auto poetry -1
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Submitted by JoeyG (user info) at 2007-03-07 16:47:33 EST (#)
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So, she sleeps with an orc, AND lets the evil horse watch?
Boy, is she off my regular whore list.
Submitted by Cyrus (user info) at 2007-03-07 16:42:06 EST (#)
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Boy did that look familiar. Sure enough, take a look at http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0091142/ It must have been the inspiration for some of the art for the movie Gothic.
Ok - I'm somewhat of a movie geek
Submitted by Amontillado (user info) at 2007-03-07 16:39:33 EST (#)
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That woman isn't very proportional. Good though.
Submitted by Zebra (user info) at 2007-03-07 16:18:38 EST (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by The_Drake (user info) at 2007-03-07 15:59:50 EST (#)
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Very erotic, Orgasmo.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-03-07 15:55:15 EST (#)
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Weird you have to copy/paste your link for it to work, otherwise just clicking it redirects you.
I find this fact very homoguilty on Disney's part.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-03-07 15:48:37 EST (#)
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Submitted by The_Drake (user info) at 2007-03-07 15:36:11 EST (#)
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I had a dream about gargoyles once.
Not the scary kind, but the ones from that show "Gargoyles"
That show kicked ass.
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http://www.ultimatedisney.com/images/g-i/gargoyles15.jpg
"Do you, Ponytailed Mullet Douche take...um...bigass, scowly almost-has-Methods-whitewalls-but-not gargolye thing-man to be your lawfully wedded husband? Do you...um...bigass, scowly almost-has-Methods-whitewalls-but-not gargoyle thing-man take Ponytailed Mullet Douche to be YOUR lawfully wedded husband? Well then, by the powers vested in me by the great state of Idaho - "GO FAMOUS POTATOES WOO!" - I now pronounce you Man and Man. You may kiss the creature."
Submitted by The_Drake (user info) at 2007-03-07 15:36:11 EST (#)
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I had a dream about gargoyles once.
Not the scary kind, but the ones from that show "Gargoyles"
That show kicked ass.
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2007-03-07 15:34:36 EST (#)
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ug, freaky picture
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-03-07 15:34:20 EST (#)
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The children trapped within the mind
And more
Will spring to bear the fall in time.
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You can free the children and dream while you're awake, too. I just wrote about it.
Submitted by Antioxident (user info) at 2007-03-07 15:28:53 EST (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-03-07 14:13:39 EST (#)
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All I know is someone needs to go all "Equus" on that fucking horse.
Submitted by inion_de_trua (user info) at 2007-03-07 14:09:49 EST (#)
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blah blah i wrote poetry blah blah blah.
gremlins and night creepies scare me.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-03-07 14:00:31 EST (#)
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Submitted by sicosemen (user info) at 2007-03-07 13:53:39 EST (#)
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We should burgle the women's opthamology section at sears together dressed up as Hawaii salesmen of the tuberculosis cure. What do you think?
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You sport the grass skirt and coconut bikini top.
I'll wear the loud button-down with sweat stains and grow out a weapons-grade mustache.
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2007-03-07 13:56:02 EST (#)
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yum.
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2007-03-07 13:54:59 EST (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by sicosemen (user info) at 2007-03-07 13:53:39 EST (#)
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We should burgle the women's opthamology section at sears together dressed up as Hawaii salesmen of the tuberculosis cure. What do you think?
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-03-07 13:50:19 EST (#)
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I totally dreamed that I kissed the new man at work last night.
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-03-07 13:49:25 EST (#)
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Submitted by FlakMonkey (user info) at 2007-03-07 13:49:24 EST (#)
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SCOURGE SHOULD BE BANNED FOREVER.
I HATE THAT FUCKING QUEER.