What the fuck are Fridays? (589 hits)
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Submitted by Marginwalker (View user info) at 2007-03-16 03:54:18 EDT
Her fist is frozen in mid air, two inches from a dirt streaked, white door.
She stops and breathes in, looks down over her slender frame, and releases her breathe.
"I don't mind the rain. I don't mind the rain. I don't mind the rain":
The verse runs it's silent loop, lending an air of familiarity to the most certain unknown.
Breathe in again.
Release.
She watches her small hand reach up and rap the door. She quickly draws it back to her side, sucks in, and forces a rigid pose she hopes plays off as confidence.
A pre-planned moment passes. The door opens.
"You found it"
"Yeah"
"Put your stuff down, I'll show you around"
She sets her bag on the floor, and half-tiptoes behind him - aware of the way his hand shook slightly as he took her jacket.
"Do you want a glass of wine? I know you drink white...."
She takes the glass with exaggerated grace, takes a small sip, and scans the room with curious eyes.
Her eyes are held beyond the living room, out to the balcony - facing east and eight stories up.
"She, the city"
Stretched out before her, the grace of the skyline lays in plain view.
"She, the city"
The rest of the small apartment seems painfully white.
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He undresses her slowly - taking in every inch of pale skin as it's laid bare to candle glow.
The room is lit soft and smells faint of cranberry, the window faces east to greet dawn. The sheets blow quietly in midnight winds.
She slips easy into his slow gaze. He slides his hand along her traces - mesmerized.
The undress is soundless and drawn out.
He gasps as he enters.
She curses.
In a bare room; white sheets, faint music, and starlight:
In a bare room -
Speechless -
they dance.
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Face in cupped hands, she watches the sun rise slowly;
Half lost in lust.
Looking over, she brushes back a lost lock of fire from a face held in peaceful dream, and sits up.
Without waking him she dresses, and creaks the old door open.
Outside, the sidewalk is lit up - the air crisp in new spring.
She turns back, and looks up to an empty balcony and sun-streamed bedroom window.
With a quick step, she continues,
and carries herself, happily,
back home.
User Reviews
Submitted by Danger_Ranger (user info) at 2007-03-16 19:10:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
ever since I stopped drinking beer every time I poo it feels like I'm being torn asunder. It's disconcerting, and it hurts.
Submitted by marginwalker (user info) at 2007-03-16 17:46:24 EDT (#)
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http://www.ubersite.com/m/32774
Submitted by FartSmeller (user info) at 2007-03-16 16:13:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I don't know what this was about. +2 for confusing a fucking genius like me.
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2007-03-16 16:02:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
you remembered what SPF stands for
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-03-16 12:56:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2007-03-16 12:46:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
i like you.
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2007-03-16 12:37:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
WTF, in-deed.
Submitted by odin (user info) at 2007-03-16 12:18:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
compensation for locksly alter fag below
Submitted by DesolateMisanthrope (user info) at 2007-03-16 12:09:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
that would be the night all the fellas and good looking bitches pack the bar while the friendless outcast dorkboys with little to No social life, scout ubersite for an ugly bitch surpassing them in ugliness.
Submitted by sideshow (user info) at 2007-03-16 11:37:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I liked it
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-03-16 11:33:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Fridays are made for justified sluttery. Now, if I could only remember how to justify it to myself..
Submitted by tiaprae (user info) at 2007-03-16 10:23:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by FlakMonkey (user info) at 2007-03-16 10:04:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by professorfuckface (user info) at 2007-03-16 04:07:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
fugazi suck you emo cunt
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alright, guitar hero! you should certainly be regarded as the be all and end all music authority. those 'guitar off' challenges to 16 year olds who have been playing for a week give you ALL kinds of credence.
Submitted by LittleMonster (user info) at 2007-03-16 09:28:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Nice to read
Submitted by lungfish (user info) at 2007-03-16 08:46:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Played well in my head.
Submitted by Mike-Mc (user info) at 2007-03-16 04:07:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
I like the picture
Submitted by professorfuckface (user info) at 2007-03-16 04:07:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
fugazi suck you emo cunt