APW: some stuff I made and also some stuff I didnt make (617 hits)
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Submitted by ampersand (View user info) at 2007-03-21 16:10:14 EDT
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Submitted by no1hasdis (user info) at 2007-05-18 13:40:21 EDT (#)
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Submitted by LisaD (user info) at 2007-05-18 13:38:07 EDT (#)
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Submitted by ampersand (user info) at 2007-04-02 20:05:47 EDT (#)
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i knew that about mary but i didnt know that about davids eyes. cool.
Submitted by Amontillado (user info) at 2007-04-02 10:56:48 EDT (#)
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The Pieta has a large Mary because it gives you more of the impression of a mother holding her child than it would if they were equal.
In the David, if you look at a closeup of his face the eyes look a little weird, like one of them is lazy. This is because it was made to be seen from far below in a different location, and he accounted for how they would look strange from below.
Submitted by Unabonger (user info) at 2007-03-24 09:05:06 EDT (#)
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I like you. You make uber more entertaining.
and +2 for this:
Submitted by ampersand (user info) at 2007-03-23 21:57:38 EDT (#)
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Romeo and Juliet is NOT based on Tristan and Isolde.
A lot of art is appropration, a lot of it is not. Just because Picasso was influenced by african culture doesnt make him wholly or partially a fraud.
almost quantum-mechanical view of art--what the fuck does that mean?
Dan Brown is NOT literature.
Stop talking out your ass.
Submitted by ampersand (user info) at 2007-03-22 12:50:32 EDT (#)
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Submitted by DirtyHarry (user info) at 2007-03-22 11:25:25 EDT (#)
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Good stuff. If I remember correctly, the hands were made big to help balance the weight of the statue.
>>>I didnt know that, I'm glad you told me.
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Submitted by bob (user info) at 2007-03-22 11:01:15 EDT (#)
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i like baudelaire more than wadsworth.
poetry is the only thing the french are awsome at, go figure.
>>>It's wordsworth! William WORDSWORTH! And for my part I have actually never found a poet whose work I consistenly enjoyed that wasnt British.
Submitted by ubetidid (user info) at 2007-03-22 12:47:00 EDT (#)
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nice
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-03-22 12:33:32 EDT (#)
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Submitted by DirtyHarry (user info) at 2007-03-22 11:25:25 EDT (#)
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Good stuff. If I remember correctly, the hands were made big to help balance the weight of the statue.
Submitted by bob (user info) at 2007-03-22 11:01:15 EDT (#)
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i like baudelaire more than wadsworth.
poetry is the only thing the french are awsome at, go figure.
Submitted by particle_man58 (user info) at 2007-03-22 10:48:53 EDT (#)
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That was cool.
Submitted by bart (user info) at 2007-03-22 02:42:07 EDT (#)
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I like your stuff. Post more originals.
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2007-03-21 22:51:46 EDT (#)
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I like apw but like it even better when people show things they themselves did...whether that be drawings, photos, or writing...etc
Submitted by lungfish (user info) at 2007-03-21 20:30:03 EDT (#)
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Submitted by ampersand (user info) at 2007-03-21 19:29:15 EDT (#)
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I'm guessing stanzas 4 and 5 are the ones that break the flow? (I'm definitely not trying to match ugly meter with pretty meter, I'm just rhythmically challenged).
the first stanza is about strength, I think I should change the first line to make that more clear though.
the second stanza is about intelligence
the third is about beauty
The last three are about the ugly son. I'm aware that narcissus had no children, i was just trying to say 'an ugly narcissist' without just straight up saying 'an ugly narcissist'.
I'm not really sure what to do about stanzas 4 and 5. I know they disrupt things but to remove them completely would destroy the meaning. Or did no one catch a meaning anyways?
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2007-03-21 18:09:12 EDT (#)
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Poetry should be banned.
Not only in Ubersite...I'm talking about banning it in the United States.
Submitted by Slash (user info) at 2007-03-21 16:49:34 EDT (#)
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I liked this.
Submitted by beeltea (user info) at 2007-03-21 16:30:10 EDT (#)
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Submitted by nitty34 (user info) at 2007-03-21 16:19:47 EDT (#)
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Pretty decent but what was the fucking point?
APW has got to go
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Why would you choose this particular post to sound off on? This post isn't like most APW posts since there is so much original work. So even if APW is pointless, this post certainly isn't.
Bad example. BAD example!
Submitted by Zebra (user info) at 2007-03-21 16:24:49 EDT (#)
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Submitted by The_taste_of_Monkeys (user info) at 2007-03-21 16:24:39 EDT (#)
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Ah David and his tiny Italian junk. I feel sorry for the eye-ties sometimes...not often as I waggle my gigantic British penos in their general direction, but sometimes.
OK so never.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-03-21 16:22:00 EDT (#)
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Submitted by nitty34 (user info) at 2007-03-21 16:19:47 EDT (#)
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Pretty decent but what was the fucking point?
APW has got to go
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Pretty good question to ask of anything written, printed, painted or otherwise produced don't you think?
If APW has to go then Ubersite has got to go.
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2007-03-21 16:21:14 EDT (#)
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It looks like a big front of mizzle is headed my way
Submitted by nitty34 (user info) at 2007-03-21 16:19:47 EDT (#)
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Pretty decent but what was the fucking point?
APW has got to go
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-03-21 16:17:12 EDT (#)
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Holy randomness-
I thought your fractal was smoke, so yes, that works.
The starfish and the turtle make me happy. And I like the green wallpaper you made.
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-03-21 16:16:23 EDT (#)
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You flirt with a steady meter in a few of the stanzas. They flow well and really run down the page. This, unfortunately, makes the uneven stanzas between them sound awkward and might jar the reader a bit if they're pacing out the lines.
Unless you're trying to 'do' what you're writing about and pit beautiful and ugly meter against one another, in the most human fashion possible.
You really need a tablet. Fuck the pen tool.
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2007-03-21 16:14:02 EDT (#)
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Fuck yeah.
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2007-03-21 16:13:58 EDT (#)
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cool pictures, etc, etc.
I'm going to quote the girl I work with in regards to your poem:
"I don't understand it. It's just a bunch of words thrown together."
Submitted by The_Drake (user info) at 2007-03-21 16:13:22 EDT (#)
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This made no sense...
Submitted by ampersand (user info) at 2007-03-21 16:11:45 EDT (#)
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sorry, I just noticed that it was 2mb. prolly shouldve clicked 'save for web' instead of 'save as'.