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Blue

Submitted by FALLEN at 2012-04-27 15:49:03 EDT
Rating: 1.05 on 18 ratings (24 reviews) (Review this item) (V)

You can see a lot at thirty thousand feet
A lot of nothing mostly.
I stare out the window, flying the wrong direction on wings that aren’t mine.
Lights from below flicker on as I try to figure out what they are.
A town, a city, I don’t know.
I don’t care.
The Sun gets bored of racing me and pulls ahead,
letting the darkness overtake me just a little more.
Day and night reach a perfect balance and the sky takes on the exact color of your eyes.
For those few moments I’m lost in your blue and I am reminded just how much of you I still carry with me.
But I already knew that.


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Submitted by RoadSong at 2012-05-02 19:58:26 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

de photo - da plane

Submitted by DeMoNiC at 2012-05-02 19:53:56 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

Fuck I hate poetry. This however, this reminds me of someone and I like it.

Submitted by Bubba2341 at 2012-04-30 17:15:03 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

Submitted by monkeyswithguns at 2012-04-30 08:57:01 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

Submitted by orphelia at 2012-04-28 19:06:16 EDT (#)

Submitted by HurtByTheSun at 2012-04-28 09:12:25 EDT (#)
Rating: -2

Shite
____
ahahahahaha

at least he consistently loathes it.

Submitted by skrapmetal at 2012-04-28 17:32:47 EDT (#)

Submitted by Quartermain at 2012-04-28 12:11:41 EDT (#)

I've always felt that poems that don't rhizza
reflect a fundamental lack of effizza.

Submitted by Quartermain at 2012-04-28 12:11:41 EDT (#)

I've always felt that poems that don't rhyme reflect a fundamental lack of effort.

Submitted by Shlongy at 2012-04-28 10:13:35 EDT (#)
Rating: -2

zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Submitted by allowbot at 2012-04-28 09:24:10 EDT (#)
Rating: 1

I like the irony of your username and this post.

Submitted by HurtByTheSun at 2012-04-28 09:12:25 EDT (#)
Rating: -2

Shite.

Submitted by skrapmetal at 2012-04-28 08:56:26 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

Not much of a poetry guy, me, but I put sort of a slow Cm blues progression behind this in my mind as I read it and I like it. Also: what Sacrilicious said.

Submitted by lostinwonderland at 2012-04-28 00:34:18 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

I agree with Sage, wish it were a bit longer.

Submitted by Sacrilicious at 2012-04-28 00:27:32 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

I like everything about this except I would edit out "as I try to figure out what they are."

Submitted by Johnny99 at 2012-04-27 22:10:42 EDT (#)
Rating: -2

Really...I read it again. And I wanted to encourage you. But it's not good. At all.

Submitted by Johnny99 at 2012-04-27 22:09:49 EDT (#)

this isn't good.

Submitted by SilvrWolf at 2012-04-27 20:24:04 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

I'm going flying tomorrow. Gonna do the fancy lets-fly-to-a-city-and-eat-lunch-then-fly-back-home-for-dinner thing. Any recommendations, East Coasters?

Submitted by MANICMOTHER at 2012-04-27 19:37:42 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

Submitted by grÜeMaster emeritus and uberlord supreme at 2012-04-27 19:00:12 EDT (#)
Rating: -2

Submitted by Poots at 2012-04-27 17:47:50 EDT (#)
Rating: 2


Submitted by ilikesteak at 2012-04-27 16:58:05 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

YOU HAD A CAMERA ON THE PLANE!?!?!?!?!?!?!

HOW DID IT NOT CRASH?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

YOU NEARLY CAUSED WORLD WAR THREE!?!?!?!?!?!?!

Submitted by Sage at 2012-04-27 16:55:18 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

I would have liked for this to be longer, but it'll do.

Submitted by Sage at 2012-04-27 16:53:53 EDT (#)

I'm blue da ba dee da ba die, da ba dee da ba die.

Ok, I'll read now.

Submitted by Yes at 2012-04-27 16:43:47 EDT (#)

This romantic shit is really not my bag. Cool photo though.

Submitted by orphelia at 2012-04-27 16:28:46 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

I know it too.


Homer: All right, Herb. I'll lend you the 2,000 bucks. But you have
to forgive me and treat me like a brother.

Herb: Nope.

Homer: All right, then, just give me the drinking bird.

Brother Can You Spare Two Dimes?