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APW: Grasping Sand

Submitted by Orgasmatron at 2006-12-20 23:55:35 EST
Rating: 1.84 on 17 ratings (17 reviews) (Review this item) (V)

One day the world will read one hundred words
And reading, come to find the soul of Man
United as drawn, each, the mortal thirds
Divining by the work of human hands;
With alchemy the masters, passed, did spell
Their leaden labor, testing mettle's might,
Too golden or too straw the letters fell
From dying ink to fading sheets of white.
And in the days beyond the setting sun,
When one to one we take to promised rest
The still-writ rhyme will find itself undone
With one false beat or word to turn its quest.
The heart still seeks perfection from the line,
The words will come, but they will not be mine.



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Submitted by Stagger_Lee at 2006-12-21 18:57:28 EST (#)
Rating: 2

I like it.

Submitted by Orgasmatron at 2006-12-21 18:32:35 EST (#)
Rating: 0

I often wonder
Does wilderness beat the pond?
I often wonder

Submitted by ubetidid at 2006-12-21 14:44:22 EST (#)
Rating: 2

I often wonder
if being the poet laureate
of uber is enough for you.

Submitted by kaos-king at 2006-12-21 13:32:46 EST (#)
Rating: 2

Submitted by TheUniter at 2006-12-21 10:59:31 EST (#)
Rating: 1


Submitted by charminglybeef at 2006-12-21 10:30:02 EST (#)
Rating: 2

I hate reading your poetry. It makes me green with envy and the related nausea.

I know you wrote that in thirty minutes. Move to Canada and you could be our poet laureate.

Oh yeah, and btw:

http://www.last.fm/music/Super_Collider/_/Closetails

I dunno... I'm just kinda for the frontiers of music. And the mating of soul and machine brings stories to the surface of my skin.

Submitted by CaptainThorns at 2006-12-21 08:58:50 EST (#)
Rating: 2

There's an empty spot I've always had inside me. I tried to fill it with
family, religion, community service. But those were all dead ends. I
think this chair is the answer.

-- Homer Simpson
Brother Can You Spare Two Dimes?

Submitted by Orgasmatron at 2006-12-21 08:15:49 EST (#)
Rating: 0

You're only figuring that out now?

Submitted by S.I. Co. at 2006-12-21 07:01:35 EST (#)
Rating: 2

I think you have homogay tendencies.

Submitted by Beano312003 at 2006-12-21 06:10:40 EST (#)
Rating: 2

nice.

Submitted by joedaddy at 2006-12-21 00:46:51 EST (#)
Rating: 1

Submitted by Bubba2341 at 2006-12-21 00:41:33 EST (#)
Rating: 2

Good ol St. Jerry.

http://www.ubersite.com/m/97025 <---- blatant linkwhore.

Submitted by shitfuck at 2006-12-21 00:38:56 EST (#)
Rating: 2


Ahahhhaahahahhhaaaaaahahahhaahahahhaahahahhaaa.


Submitted by Bubba2341 at 2006-12-21 00:12:41 EST (#)
Rating: 2

Awesome poetry.

Submitted by Orgasmatron at 2006-12-21 00:07:05 EST (#)
Rating: 0

Submitted by Crystle (user info) at 2006-12-21 00:05:15 (#)
Ranking: 2

barely made it

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Like I'd miss an APW.




Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2006-12-21 00:02:37 (#)
Ranking: 2

113

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Like the thing above says, it won't be mine.

(SWF)

Submitted by Crystle at 2006-12-21 00:05:15 EST (#)
Rating: 2

barely made it

Submitted by Sacrilicious at 2006-12-21 00:02:37 EST (#)
Rating: 2

113


Twenty of the suckiest minutes of my life.

-- Homer Simpson
Burns, Baby Burns