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Idiot Prayer

Submitted by Orgasmatron at 2007-03-12 15:34:07 EDT
Rating: 1.72 on 31 ratings (31 reviews) (Review this item) (V)

Empty words at empty tables, hollow homes and hollow fables,
Mirror, mirror, on the wall show me where the bombs will fall...



How many hours will we spend forgetting
The air drawn in reserved and silent spaces?
Our past these hours embrace and turn to stone,
Stock-still and taciturn,
Obscured by the moment and the bones of another's face.

And how many heartbeats do we have left?
Running slow, persistent as the night
Collapses ventricles and persuades a pulse,
Blood born behind a breath
Nevermore remembered at the taking of the light.

Make these empty spaces sing,
These starthird angels falling from our eyes,
That we may find a way,
That we might remember
And forget the consecution of the day,
The evening news and the dinner plate,
The affair, the games, the statements.
The lullaby of progress interrupt
- Hodie mihi, cras tibi -
Oh God
The hour is much too late.

Our time is short
But we have heartbeats left.



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not much chance for survival if the neon bible is right.JPG


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Submitted by Sacrilicious at 2007-03-27 21:19:04 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

reval

Submitted by coley at 2007-03-13 21:16:03 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

OMG I GETz IT!!1!!

Actually, O-Man, it's funny you say that.
When I was in kindergarten, right before Halloween, we made these posters with owls on them and I wanted mine to be awesomer than everyone else's so I figured I'd give it a little speech bubble.

My teacher thought it was REEEEAL FUNNY that my owl said "WHO! WHO!"

what can I say; I've always cared about spelling.

Submitted by Orgasmatron at 2007-03-13 11:48:28 EDT (#)
Rating: 0

Who?

Who?



OMFG GET IT???

Submitted by coley at 2007-03-13 11:36:05 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-03-12 17:25:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0

Submitted by coley (user info) at 2007-03-12 17:18:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2

Don't be mad at me, silver-haired fox.

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How could I be?

But if names must be called, I prefer "white owl." Or as Noons once put it, "graybeard."
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THE WHITE OWL HAS LANDED
REPEAT
THE WHITE OWL HAS LANDED

Submitted by rorrim at 2007-03-13 09:32:20 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

'But we have heartbeats left. '

Either you're clairvoyant, or you're peeking on my harddrive....

Or there's parallel thinking going on, here...




Or maybe i'm just a little paranoid, after last night's drinking...


Submitted by JoeyG at 2007-03-13 04:04:03 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

Submitted by Stagger_Lee (user info) at 2007-03-13 03:10:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2

I do it constantly. On purpose. I am Title Thief.

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Coming up with titles is half the fun!

Submitted by Stagger_Lee at 2007-03-13 03:10:15 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

I do it constantly. On purpose. I am Title Thief.

Submitted by Orgasmatron at 2007-03-12 22:16:10 EDT (#)
Rating: 0

Submitted by Stagger_Lee (user info) at 2007-03-12 20:37:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2

Well, obviously, this had me at the title. But I enjoyed it anyway.

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I had the title before the text, which is an odd change. Usually I can't title my pieces to save my life. Liked how it sounded, liked what it could lead to, and didn't think for a second that it was already used before. Which isn't exactly fair to the boys, because it's not as if I forgot the song or anything.

As they say, "certain songs they get so scratched into our souls."
Now I'm worried how many other titles or lines I've ingested without thinking about.

Submitted by Stagger_Lee at 2007-03-12 20:37:35 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

Well, obviously, this had me at the title. But I enjoyed it anyway.

Submitted by lungfish at 2007-03-12 20:00:37 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

Hmmmm. Yes. There's another I like.

Submitted by Foolproof at 2007-03-12 18:18:25 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

Submitted by The_taste_of_Monkeys (user info) at 2007-03-12 17:52:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2

Submitted by DesolateMisanthrope (user info) at 2007-03-12 17:43:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2

What is it with these shitty posts? I think I should post soon to offset all the garbage I am seeing as of late.
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Why hasnt this waste of skin been banned yet?

Fucking oxygen thief.
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TTOM is usually an easy going guy, so when he hates you - you really suck ass.

I think this ass clown is locksly. Since he's been gone we haven't seen shinebox, mr. noisy, or anybody else I said was his alters.

If it isn't locksly, then this guy must be in good with Bart to still be around.

Submitted by Zebra at 2007-03-12 18:14:31 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

Submitted by FlakMonkey (user info) at 2007-03-12 17:27:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2

something in the second verse is bothering me, but i am unable to put my finger on it right now.

when i do i will come back and adjust my rating accordingly.


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This struck me as funny, for SOME reason.

The monkey scores!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aNihkeTdUkA

Submitted by The_taste_of_Monkeys at 2007-03-12 17:52:35 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

Submitted by DesolateMisanthrope (user info) at 2007-03-12 17:43:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2

What is it with these shitty posts? I think I should post soon to offset all the garbage I am seeing as of late.
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Why hasnt this waste of skin been banned yet?

Fucking oxygen thief.

Submitted by DesolateMisanthrope at 2007-03-12 17:43:55 EDT (#)
Rating: -2

What is it with these shitty posts? I think I should post soon to offset all the garbage I am seeing as of late.

Submitted by JonnyX at 2007-03-12 17:37:36 EDT (#)
Rating: 1

not my favouritest...

Submitted by S.I. Co. at 2007-03-12 17:37:24 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

I have a savings account.

Submitted by Orgasmatron at 2007-03-12 17:36:42 EDT (#)
Rating: 0

Submitted by sicosemen (user info) at 2007-03-12 17:18:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2

Are ye saved?

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Are you?




Submitted by Caulaincourt (user info) at 2007-03-12 17:20:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2

TACITURNE! :-O C'EST QU'ELLE A BEAUCOUP DE VOCABULAIRE, LA SALOPE!

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I'd give you some grief, clown, but it's clear you know far more anglais than I remember francais.

Submitted by FlakMonkey at 2007-03-12 17:27:57 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

something in the second verse is bothering me, but i am unable to put my finger on it right now.

when i do i will come back and adjust my rating accordingly.

Submitted by Orgasmatron at 2007-03-12 17:25:23 EDT (#)
Rating: 0

Submitted by coley (user info) at 2007-03-12 17:18:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2

Don't be mad at me, silver-haired fox.

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How could I be?

But if names must be called, I prefer "white owl." Or as Noons once put it, "graybeard."

Submitted by Caulaincourt at 2007-03-12 17:20:16 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

TACITURNE! :-O C'EST QU'ELLE A BEAUCOUP DE VOCABULAIRE, LA SALOPE!

Submitted by S.I. Co. at 2007-03-12 17:18:38 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

Are ye saved?

Submitted by coley at 2007-03-12 17:18:00 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

Don't be mad at me, silver-haired fox.

Submitted by Sacrilicious at 2007-03-12 17:10:05 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

Taciturn.

Submitted by zimm0r at 2007-03-12 17:08:57 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

Incantion Spell Binding of Zephyr Realm!

Submitted by Orgasmatron at 2007-03-12 16:57:31 EDT (#)
Rating: 0

And that means more than the rating, Le Pew.

Submitted by Shlongy at 2007-03-12 16:53:14 EDT (#)
Rating: -1

I must be an idiot...

Submitted by Caulaincourt at 2007-03-12 16:49:43 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

i read your post. i don't do that very often.

Submitted by inion_de_trua at 2007-03-12 16:34:18 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

i forgot what i was rating... but i think i meant to give it a +2.

Submitted by Zebra at 2007-03-12 16:07:56 EDT (#)
Rating: 0

I liked the prelude.

Submitted by ih8u2man at 2007-03-12 15:52:57 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

This poem speaks of tales less fathomed.
Thoughts and words and wisdom's shadowed.

This post speaks volumes of our fate.
Good thing you posted now - not late.

Submitted by CaptainThorns at 2007-03-12 15:51:02 EDT (#)
Rating: 2

Now that's a REAL man's poem.


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